You use a skillful metrical variation in the second to last line, modifying your iambs by having two unstressed syllables followed by a foot with two stresses (at a far more = ~~--). DuVal taught me about that. It's a good poem, James. I really enjoyed it.
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You use a skillful metrical variation in the second to last line, modifying your iambs by having two unstressed syllables followed by a foot with two stresses (at a far more = ~~--). DuVal taught me about that. It's a good poem, James. I really enjoyed it.
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